This is my first DUET with Hasty Words, What an honor and fun experience! Please check out Hasty Words for some amazing art.
http://hastywords.wordpress.com/2014/02/11/peering-through-gods-kaleidoscope/
This duet took some time to write due to me losing my place a billion times. She was patient though and I think the end result turned out beautifully. Visit SerendipiTee here.
Written by SerendipiTee and HastyWords
Wading through a cold, familiar river
I happened upon a gold and silver beam
The brilliant sparkling pulled me to the sun
And dragged me deeper into the flowing stream
I stared directly with fascination and for the first time
Was not blinded but could see that someone
Had left his mark, a message, a rhyming song
Written in fire upon this fiery globe in front of me
Wading through a fireof lukewarm flames
I happened upon an unexpected inferno
That, engulfing me, soothed me and pulled me to its center
I shielded my eyes -careful little eyes for what you see-
I blinked and…
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I like the fire imagery. Thank you for sharing. : )
I’ve never written a poem with anyone. It was a fun, interesting experience because I really didn’t know where it was going. The meaning is left up to the reader’s interpretation, I think. It really is like a kaleidoscope. Bits and pieces came together for a moment at a time, and this was the end result.
i glad that i able to step into your world, another loving blessing from HastyWords…
Thank you for stopping by. I hope you stay for a while. Thanks for taking time to read and for commenting. This post was a step out of my comfort zone. I like trying something new.